What a stunning piece. This fits a certain mood perfectly. Please, continue to do what you do.
What a stunning piece. This fits a certain mood perfectly. Please, continue to do what you do.
I shall! Don't worry, and I have something very interesting coming up soon.
agreed, at 0: 30 it is much too loud, speakers were blowing out slightly. tame that down. And agreed again, if you added a bit more in the form of a base line, rhythmically, etc. i think this song could be kickin. love what you have so far though.
Thank you, I did what i could to imporve the song, I mastered it the best I could. There's nothing more I can do to this song but I'll keep that in mind for my next songs.
If you could drop a little more variation into the base part, rhythmically, i think this song would benefit greatly. As it stands now, a real head banger, but maybe some 16th notes in the base line could add a tiny bit of variation.
I understand what you mean, but I wanted to keep the drop very slow I originally had several 16th notes. plus Im already on to other projects, its a done project! thanks for the input though!
this i can appreciate
considering you didnt write the track, the soloing is decent. this i can appreciate
Sorohanro is the man.
no, just no
this was so stupid, why touch a perfectly fine song. you sound like you need a drink, and i would suggest taking one.
I'll buy you a beer, bitch. All you have to do is show up. :D
ehh
not a fan of the whiney out of tune guitar, personal preference i guess.
Thanks for the info. I'm not a fan of idiots, yet....
very good
catchy, not generic, but....typical but pleasing meoldy. l liked it alot, keep developing.
Thanks very much
dont know why this was rated so high
maybe the lack of votes, most likely, i enjoyed it, but with a riff like that, you cant expect too many points for originality. i liked the beat alot, maybe if you tried adding different effects or layers onto the instrument you were using for the main melody, it would help with changing the song up a bit, i just felt the song was repeating itself a little too much. just a little tweaking could make this alot better
Thanks.
I've realized most of what you've said awhile ago.
Though, I've had no help on any of this. (also, I've been REALLY busy with life)
I'm completely self-taught, unfortunately.
I want to change it so much, but don't know how.
allright
i said before you have a good sound, but now i've decided one thing. i know you are going for that new indie , emo voice, but it gets a little too far into your nose. you would sound a lot better if you tried to balance between your resonances. you have one in your throat, the back of your jaw, and your nose, if you put a finger on each next time you sing, you'll probably feel it mostly in your nose. i'm not trying to sound snobby, but just trying to help. you would sound sound 100 times better. alot of raw talent.
Ive tried the whole finger on each of the part thing but I only have 2 hands...is that a problem? I cant get my nose front my throat and jaw...oh well.
Oh and goots not trying to be "emo", he is who he is, an indie, one-man-band person who loves making music. If you still think GOot is emo, check his myspace, www.myspace.com/goot.
i win.
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