hmm
good start, lacks umph or much originality, and the instruments you used seem to be a little, sub par i guess. catchy, and a good start.
hmm
good start, lacks umph or much originality, and the instruments you used seem to be a little, sub par i guess. catchy, and a good start.
enjoyed this man
better than most things on here man, i enjoy you putting up the lyrics too. superb job my friend
i hope you go big.
you have so much talent its not even funny. some day ill get my shit up here when i get a means to record it. youll see. keep on keepin on. this shit got my noddin my head.
allright
i said before you have a good sound, but now i've decided one thing. i know you are going for that new indie , emo voice, but it gets a little too far into your nose. you would sound a lot better if you tried to balance between your resonances. you have one in your throat, the back of your jaw, and your nose, if you put a finger on each next time you sing, you'll probably feel it mostly in your nose. i'm not trying to sound snobby, but just trying to help. you would sound sound 100 times better. alot of raw talent.
Ive tried the whole finger on each of the part thing but I only have 2 hands...is that a problem? I cant get my nose front my throat and jaw...oh well.
Oh and goots not trying to be "emo", he is who he is, an indie, one-man-band person who loves making music. If you still think GOot is emo, check his myspace, www.myspace.com/goot.
less bass
please. it started off well but wow, it was just kinda overwhelming at the end
i almost feel compelled to write a review
i honestly dont know what to say say. if im not looking at the track bar, i find myself wanting the song to end, because it just keeps going, and the more i listen, it makes me laugh at how ridiculous it is. But thats the best part in way, but it isnt. its annoying as hell, but i keep listening. which is why i think you did a good job.
you have a good sound
solid, a little repetetive, and i understand thats the song, but still. But solid
Thanks for the review!
good
i love the simplistic acoustic and voice. relaxing to listen to. very good.
good, but could be better
The beat sounds a little weak for that epic piano you smacked down, i was expecting a little more, but it never seems to climax. maybe a little deeper bass, especially when the backup beat dies down. otherwise its a great song.
i agree
with the flow issue. you arent a rapper. but the actual rhyme is good.
i win.
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